Saturday, March 23, 2019

Book Review: The Calculating Stars by Mary Robinette Kowal

The Calculating Stars

by Mary Robinette Kowal

Gray Planet Commentary

  • Frustrating
  • Stuff I Don’t Believe
  • Why is this Science Fiction?

Gray Planet Indices

  • Good Book Index: 50/100
  • Literature Index: 30/100
  • Magic Factor: 10/100
  • Sense of Wonder Index: 15/100
Warning: There are minor spoilers in this review.
The Calculating Stars by Mary Robinette Kowal is the first novel in a trilogy. The trilogy is an expansion of the story “The Lady Astronaut of Mars” which won Kowal the Hugo Award for best novelette in 2014. The setting of the story is an alternate American history where Dewey beats Truman in the 1948 presidential election. In 1952. Washington and much of the eastern seaboard of the US is destroyed. Scientists predict that the coming climate catastrophe will make Earth uninhabitable in a few years. The response to this scientific prediction is to accelerate the space program in the United States with the goal of saving a portion of the human race by migrating to another planet.
Elma York and her husband, Nathaniel are in a remote cabin in the mountains away from Washington, DC when the meteor strikes. Elma York is a pilot, a scientist and a mathematician. Her husband, Nathaniel, is a rocket scientist. In this new world, with much of the military and scientific establishment and all of the political establishment destroyed by the asteroid, Nathaniel becomes the chief rocket scientist for the National Advisory Committee for Aeronautics (NACA), and Elma becomes a “computer”—a human who does mathematical calculations, like orbital trajectories, for NACA rocket launches.
The Calculating Stars takes us through the recovery from the asteroid’s impact and the creation of the NACA space program. The subsequent history of NACA is very similar to that of NASA, but accelerated by the impending climate doom the asteroid has initiated.
Elma’s work at NACA and her desire to become an astronaut are the focal point in the story and a plot device to allow an examination of racial and sexual bias. The social setting is American in the 1950s and Kowal does a very good job of evoking the times including the expectations (or lack of expectations) for women and minorities.
Kowal doesn’t really deal with the effects of the asteroid. The Secretary of Agriculture survives because he is not in DC. He becomes president and things just sort of go on—there is no struggle for power and the America Kowal creates accepts that its political system and social structure will be unaffected by such a tragedy. The capitol is relocated to Kansas City as are the rocket launching facilities of NACA. Similarly, the idea (one of the proponents of which is Elma’s meteorologist brother) that an unsurvivable nuclear winter is coming is also just accepted and along with it, the necessity for putting massive resources into the fledgling space program, primarily run by the United States, to allow a few select people—mostly white, mostly American and all male to go into space. Kowal solves these massive problems with a few sentences of exposition. The asteroid disaster is only a means to an end—Kowal needs a reason to accelerate the space program in her alternate history.
Elma is an interesting strong female character and Kowal’s development of her is well-done and interesting. Her friendship with a handful of African American women provides the opportunity to develop the story of racial bias. Elma suffers from debilitating anxiety under some social circumstances as she becomes the “lady astronaut”. This severe anxiety disorder gives Kowal the opportunity to address the stigma of mental illness.
I believe in the character of Elma York as Kowal has created her, but I think Kowal has sabotaged the primary purpose of her novel by making Elma so much a part of her times. Elma doesn’t succeed by overcoming her weaknesses through the strength of her will and personality. I’m not sure how or why she succeeds and that is my biggest problem with the novel. To have Elma, with all of her weaknesses, become a lady astronaut and the pilot of the first Moon mission while taking anxiety medication (Miltown) is just simply not believable. I can believe a woman would be the best, but not Elma. Any person as affected as she is by stress related anxiety is simply not a suitable candidate for the job. We are looking for the intellectual, physical, and emotional elite for roles like this. Elma does not pass muster.
The primary science fictional element of the story, is the accelerated space program operating in the context of 1950s America following the asteroid disaster. But again, Kowal fails to deliver. The storyline she follows is too similar to the actual events of the Apollo program. She shows us no creative alternatives, but simply reiterates the primary events and technology of Apollo. All she is really showing us is the inclusion of women, but her choice of Elma as the chosen woman is not believable.
Although I respect and admire much of what Kowal has done in this novel, in presentation it is a failure, particularly as a science fiction novel. There is too much that doesn’t ring true, the detail is too skimpy to justify major portions of the action, and the primary theme of the book—that Elma is the woman for the job is not believable.

Wednesday, March 20, 2019

Book Review: Only Human by Sylvain Neuvel

Only Human

by Sylvain Neuvel

Gray Planet Commentary

  • Fun and easy read
  • Moments of brilliance and insight
  • Dissatisfying ending

Gray Planet Indices

  • Sense of Wonder Index: 40/100
  • Literature Index: 20/100
  • Good Book Index: 65/100
  • Magic Factor: 20/100

Warning: There are minor spoilers in this review.

Only Human by Sylvain Neuvel is the final installment of the Themis Files trilogy. The first book was Sleeping Giants, the second was Waking Gods.

The trilogy started out as a classic science fiction puzzle story. Rose Franklin, as a young girl, discovered a giant robot buried in her backyard. Seventeen years later, as an adult, Rose, now a physicist, works to understand the giant robot, which is an artifact of an alien civilization. Along with Kara Resnick and Vincent Couture, Rose attempts to determine the purpose and function of the giant robots (there end up being lots of them), and the motivations of the aliens who created them.

In Only Human, Rose, Vincent, Eva (Vincent’s ten year old daughter by Kara Resnick), and General Eugene Govender, have been transported to the home planet of the creators of the giant robots after the events of Walking Gods. As with the other two books of the trilogy, the book is epistolary—the story consists of a sequence of documents or interviews of the characters.

Only Human is a quick, breezy read. Chronologically, we skip back and forth between the time Rose, Vincent and Eva spend on Esat Ekt, the home planet of the Ekt, the builders of the robots, and the present time of the novel, which takes place on Earth, after the three have been transported back home in one of the giant robots, Themis.

On Esat Ekt, the Ekt are in the midst of a political upheaval caused by their interference with human development on Earth thousands of years ago. The Ekt (in Waking Gods), had murdered millions of humans in an attempt to correct that interference. The guilt they feel as a result of the massacre causes them to reverse course and their political system becomes gridlocked trying to guarantee they never again interfere with other cultures. This puts Rose, Vincent, and Eva in limbo while on Esat Ekt. Are they prisoners, or hostages, or what?

On Earth, governments have reacted to the knowledge of the aliens and their interference in human history and development by identifying and persecuting (even executing), all people who have a large amount of alien DNA as a result of the Ekt’s interference.

Neuvel has created two diverse cultural milieus that are in the midst of xenophobic revolutions that result in horrific treatment of some citizens based on arbitrary racial or genetic differences. The feel of this, particularly in the sections that take place on Earth, is similar to the current day political situation in the United States—demonizing immigrants. This cultural phenomena is not hinted at in the previous two novels, and I wonder if the third was written after 2016 and has taken on some tone of Trumpism and Brexit and the migrant problems in the EU as a result.

Neuvel has a style that gives immediacy to his characters as the point of view switches frequently from document to document in the epistolary style. We slowly learn how Rose, Vincent and Eva end up back on Earth, and more details about the political situation on Earth. Neuvel occasionally dazzles with interesting perspectives on the cultural and political situations he has created on Esat Ekt and on Earth. But these deep insights are not enough to give the novel the depth necessary to make it significant. Neuvel attempts to define the driving cultural and political forces on Esat Ekt, but doesn’t succeed. He doesn’t quite make me believe in his world, particularly Esat Ekt, and the narrative becomes trivial.

Similarly, the events on Earth and Vincent’s and Eva’s actions within them are unrealistic and without sufficient motivation. Neuvel creates a complex situation in the conflict between Vincent and his now grown daughter Eva, which seems portentous and which is intertwined with the political rivalries of nations. But neither Vincent nor Eva has anything invested in the political sides they end up fighting for. Sides are chosen for them, or occur by happenstance—they are not the agents of their choices and again the resulting conflict becomes trivial.

Rose is not engaged in any of this—she is distant from it, and from most events in the novel. She longs to return to a normal life, to abdicate the pressure and responsibility of the position events and her own actions in the previous books have thrust upon her. But Neuvel ignores this and uses Rose as the agent who resolves the world’s conflicts even though she has done her best to abdicate her responsibility and authority. Worse, the solution Rose implements is Machiavellian at best and cruel and inhuman at worst.

I enjoyed the book and wouldn’t discourage anyone from reading it, but if you expect a satisfying resolution to the situation Neuvel has created in the first two books of the trilogy, I fear you will be disappointed like I was.